我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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# X2 F3 T3 L/ U1 K% aFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
) [+ N+ J8 X; n) M+ j9 eFrom the colorful nature
3 B' _1 e# V! D1 RTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
% i8 N5 O. i- m+ m8 f4 _, C: fLet myself go ---
, Y  Q0 X( L+ [2 d3 q! [( BGo to the wild rain
6 _) P' |: y" {: F  f9 YWashing my heart and soul.

: M5 k5 m1 k% h% c) r) ~Good-bye, my happy spring;
. ]/ i( I1 \8 f* t8 \- K' Z% dGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
5 A+ w/ o( `. V$ K2 f5 u6 |It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了