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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, - m; Z: @* b! \$ Z: y- s2 \6 P
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ) x/ M7 E  l7 {1 G/ O% Y
Dreamers8 G) L: t% ?$ {- d' I( P
Savages# o( ~' i- T* g- A+ W6 _3 C# d- K1 D
Poets& @& A1 O; t6 G
Builders of canoes,9 f1 u$ W" F5 ]) O$ F
Black smiths8 {# G  h* |! E1 o) l
Murderers,
2 \6 V8 [( j8 URisk takers,
( j, `% O; K* d: ~2 @. b) K4 n8 cMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder / S4 Q% N5 \0 [" c! g. v6 t3 \3 M
As I think of what could be.
2 J+ E) I/ W  `* J* _The world is so big to me - i" x6 _/ C* u7 C
I wonder what it means to be' X9 d/ c9 i; J$ b2 k: v
I looked up at the star and smiled & t9 `1 \0 m3 C/ g* X
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。7 Z* e+ ?2 [0 z
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
! |- [" O% f" |+ j+ J" b顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,- O) I  X$ F  b
A poor old Guy;  c* M5 f+ z2 ?$ f' C' v
Legs in a bonfire,  R7 H+ f8 _% v% P' z8 }8 Y
Head in the sky
$ ?! h6 Q0 X& x$ L/ K( Y1 ?Lonely, with the feel of betray- d# r7 H# B0 v+ l! V( V
Heart empty and hollow' \4 L4 q# C/ A3 P
Alone I stand) L0 P3 E0 ?' R$ }4 n) d3 O5 A8 z- W' p
I am useless to all
- v8 J  q: q! P; G) C2 M2 n( jBut I wish I were a dove ; _' `$ e" a: ^7 p6 J
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
4 F) j% j7 H! h1 H) nI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
2 s! ?# R: Z& fI sent prayers to my god
" [* m- J7 i( m& e9 j8 @! eThough he does not answer3 T$ M- v; K' \5 u. U# N& R
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。" P0 F/ s0 v& G) a) p! m
加油加油,经常写写!
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