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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem2 p2 r" H% n e L4 q) i
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 |6 x$ B! I0 T# N, `
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 2 v- D( s4 a' k5 X, u
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
; W6 [6 m0 Y- }2 B" K+ I% o0 |1 j Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
0 z; O6 ?$ M% I, Z$ l Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind " _7 w2 B' o) d' ^: j
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
8 P9 z5 D/ _/ N) q( QHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
0 `9 G% ` M7 o- z Y; D somehow I realized you were still in my heart - v% E9 S3 I/ a+ V! I; K# Q
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness) K7 I. m7 s$ C8 R# I/ D
somehow I lost myself inside again
" R/ }0 }- ~1 z% Q4 ]5 KNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
$ Q( b4 {# N0 P' I somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion2 ]) Q8 z: B& k) O& q& O' `; E
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
2 k; C( z" A9 p8 Q, XBasically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.* y$ @4 w( m6 o+ T) p% G* A/ q3 R2 G
But........
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