我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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Summer's Coming
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' w5 \8 E/ P4 X9 n6 B) h" GFaster, hotter and sweater,
8 \- S" x7 G) N; V1 Z9 M) L: z" x$ ySummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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) [' q) I) |  Q4 j# F# l0 GFollowing the summer's step,
& J  p& h9 s. @2 E, D# R% lLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
  d9 ]1 Y  F3 X1 WWashing my heart and soul.

) o! [3 u  @5 U) O2 g# _Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
$ t  |+ c+ O$ |+ X) Y6 lI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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: C6 O4 U. ^7 _7 p5 r一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
' `: T( E1 V( m- oIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
1 }3 j) c( V- n% [# @( jbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了