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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,   ?4 P7 `$ f% j0 t. {
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  : ^# |$ C; ?  R9 B
Dreamers
1 {# ~1 O: R) S# d( @Savages
/ _2 ?4 e  j& t, }Poets8 k/ W5 m8 u7 n3 m+ V2 v( Q" t- d
Builders of canoes,
. F+ W& [; {6 D& T: q5 V1 }+ pBlack smiths: M7 @' V9 n9 o6 H$ ]$ m, Z
Murderers,5 S; r) A7 K, X" o1 c- C* K
Risk takers,
5 Z. ~8 l& B9 c2 m3 i% VMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
$ x' Y* g$ c4 a, J7 C1 |( NAs I think of what could be.
9 h! s& R4 R9 ]6 n% u) ^* WThe world is so big to me
, B, ^" l- X0 \9 k+ CI wonder what it means to be
4 H% G, \* O& {5 n2 K) y- ^I looked up at the star and smiled * m  |3 Z* [5 V. Z, e
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。, B6 k9 x  O& F7 G& \2 @  C* L
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。( [$ P% q! n# q5 G+ E" \, f6 G/ C
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,$ H. F/ o9 \8 b. Y1 C
A poor old Guy;
0 j' ]4 \! B8 o' `: l: J5 o, n+ GLegs in a bonfire,. ~9 q& I9 O6 O6 O1 B/ y
Head in the sky( T! G, {1 j1 Z% G0 A* D5 V6 }
Lonely, with the feel of betray6 B2 S# I2 \9 X7 [, h5 @3 g
Heart empty and hollow( S$ N; B, Y  z! f
Alone I stand
; R+ e" G% B* a0 ]* R! vI am useless to all
- A6 l$ R) `1 P( k; ?; XBut I wish I were a dove - C3 b9 l; t( f; C  V
Giving myself to the world, to the fire' E* v) [' T  \( a; S
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
2 A5 k" ^  E9 l' N2 x2 eI sent prayers to my god$ b( h9 n, c- J' n8 }, i
Though he does not answer
/ `- ~8 o5 ]6 |9 Y4 VHe bless me with the gift of hope 5 }$ `0 Y: B, J2 g9 h. u6 |7 u/ g
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。9 p9 ^& z7 u5 N0 x2 L! B
加油加油,经常写写!
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