我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
( C0 ^: C2 e! j. v- g) F9 OSummer's Coming
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# W, R( V$ L% k, iFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

3 P; |9 I3 W; D: yFollowing the summer's step,
4 f5 U/ ~4 Q1 ALet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
6 E( @% r" O$ S( H6 FWashing my heart and soul.

2 J% V( M$ X& }% S& m  m4 rGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
/ X' g- X. z. z  sI can prepare nothing;
6 O+ Q2 ?; r/ ?My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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