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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
7 f& b$ J: {1 S/ y: OI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  8 G: I  L' ?+ I" ]. j
Dreamers
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Poets9 s) h* h5 q. F1 L8 [* B5 Y5 r
Builders of canoes,8 X* Z' T+ P1 z/ r- F; P% ?
Black smiths
6 V1 ^8 q( y& d7 Z6 v. |Murderers,
# z% Y; M7 @4 a# Y& V) }# IRisk takers,
8 u' j) R' l9 Q' r+ v  ?$ pMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 6 Y. Y/ P0 |, V: J( V
As I think of what could be. ' B; C) c8 M; R, M1 R, z
The world is so big to me
; i  e  c) e0 s) I0 K! cI wonder what it means to be* B3 U* v& X: I- G! f& g
I looked up at the star and smiled 1 \2 |6 J6 u# Q* Y8 @6 f  T
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
+ V% b9 d3 Q+ ~3 C评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。! p) i: t+ J8 u1 }3 l
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
" M' x* w% ~+ D% p: L6 A  YA poor old Guy;& O) D8 H# I+ v" g
Legs in a bonfire,
: W5 [( }# P) n7 S1 M6 JHead in the sky5 z) f! o. M$ Y( ~& T/ c
Lonely, with the feel of betray
8 @3 W, ~7 m  W8 n& BHeart empty and hollow+ a' d+ l$ {5 A+ x
Alone I stand9 Z. S  Q6 L. L) z
I am useless to all 1 ^/ M( D1 l& t% p
But I wish I were a dove
: c3 Y2 J- z7 c2 [) {; j+ tGiving myself to the world, to the fire) o6 N8 A1 r3 n5 z" E
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind9 O* h& O$ O, Y1 v0 g* V# o
I sent prayers to my god" `4 r3 t. U+ c" }. X
Though he does not answer& ?/ G9 A0 h4 T! e* ^7 O+ l
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。& [4 n, F# h5 q' j1 x* A
加油加油,经常写写!
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